personification

 Personification

Everyone knows what a person is, but do you know what personification is?

A personification is when you assign human qualities too something that isn't alive.

                                                   Examples of personification

1 The stars danced playfully in the moonlit sky.

2 The run down  house appeared depressed.

3 The first rays of the morning tiptoed through the meadow.

4 The bees played hide and seek with the flowers as they buzzed from one to another.

5 The the river swallowed the earth as the water continued to rise higher and higher.

6 The thunder grumbled like an old man.

7 At precisely 6:30 am my alarm clock sprang into life.

8The news took me by surprise.

9 The evil tree was lurking in the shadows.

10  The ocean danced  in the moonlight.

Rich strong persuasive language

Thursday 8 september 2016

                                               Rich strong persuasive language

In my opinion

I believe

I strongly believe

You should consider

Only a fool would

Most people would agree

A sensible idea would be

The real truth is that

Doesn't everybody know that

We all know tha

Surely you would agree

Here are 2 reasons why

This clearly shows that

This clearly demonstrates

Correct use of Commas

Correct use of  Commas

1- We bought apples pears bananas and oranges for the fruit salad.  

We bought apples, pears, bananas and oranges for the fruit salad.

2- Although we arrived early  the restaurant was full.

Although we arrived early,  the restaurant was full.

3- Yes you  can put the christmas  tree up tomorrow.

Yes, you  can put the christmas  tree up tomorrow.

4- If you eat your Vegetables  you may have dessert.

 If you eat your Vegetables,  you may have dessert.

5- Lizards snakes and  turtles are all reptiles.

Lizards, snakes, and turtles are all reptiles.

Explanation writing

How does food digest

Have you ever wondered how food is digested in your stomach? I will provide you with adequate reasons as to how food is digested.

The food that you eat is masticated with your teeth and saliva. Then the food moves to  the back of your mouth to a place called the trapdoor or oesophagus.

The food goes down into stomach and gets broken down by the digestive juices. The broken down food is moved  to your small intestine, here the goodness is soaked in.

Then the food moves into the large intestine where  the water is taken out.The goodness left behind is carried through your  blood and is used for growth, repair and energy.

The waste food is excreted and goes out through your anus.